Re: [問題] 老師都說我作文不好各位也體諒一下吧

看板StarCraft (星海爭霸2 - SC2)作者 (不離不棄)時間15年前 (2011/09/13 05:24), 編輯推噓57(5701)
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XD
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XD _imba
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09/13 06:03, , 3F
小強~ 你不能死阿 等等 T哪來的小強
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09/13 06:31, , 4F
好詩好詩...XD
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09/13 06:50, , 5F
厲害厲害XDD
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09/13 06:54, , 6F
XDD好球啊~~
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XDDDD
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09/13 07:11, , 8F
好詩
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太有趣!
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09/13 07:18, , 10F
好詩好詩
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09/13 07:34, , 11F
好詩~好詩~
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09/13 07:36, , 12F
不錯 我就是那雌鱒魚
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09/13 07:42, , 13F
強姦了100遍很有怨的感覺XDDD
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09/13 07:55, , 14F
節奏很好
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09/13 07:58, , 15F
XDDDDDDDDDD
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太棒了!
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09/13 08:04, , 17F
有聲音啊這篇!!!
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09/13 08:11, , 18F
以後徵文就辦文章改寫好了哈哈
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XDDDDDDDDD
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09/13 08:21, , 20F
怎麼嵌入聲音檔的?XDDD
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09/13 08:22, , 21F
這系列文越看越好笑了
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09/13 08:32, , 22F
這系列文快讓我笑死了XD
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09/13 08:33, , 23F
漢賦 唐詩 宋詞 元曲 明傳奇都要來一篇嗎?XDDDD
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09/13 08:49, , 24F
快笑死了XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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高手啊!
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太厲害了,推
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好詩好詩
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太有才了!
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這篇好笑XDDD!!
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好!
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好詩好詩
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XDDDDDDDDDD
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XDDD
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XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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09/13 11:11, , 36F
後面再加個唐伯虎打椅子桌子的連結會更好
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XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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09/13 11:27, , 39F
該死 這文有聲音阿wwww
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09/13 11:29, , 40F
有個小BUG "可憐馬林他魂歸天" 那句魂跟歸打反了
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09/13 11:52, , 41F
好詩 太有才了!
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09/13 11:59, , 42F
星海三百首=.=?
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XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD 我不禁要稱讚你.....
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09/13 12:14, , 44F
快出個對子對死他!!
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XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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推啊~~~ XDDDDDDDD
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這篇一定要m起來喇 太好笑了XDDD
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09/13 12:57, , 48F
謝謝你9527
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夭壽....真的照那個節奏唸完了XDDD
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這種澎湃的撞擊力!!!!
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謝謝你9527!
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這不推不行啊XDDD
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好強
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XDDDDDDDD
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高手中的的高高手阿~~~~~~~~~~~
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竹板快書阿XD
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我滑鼠自己打拍子了
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謝謝你9527~~~
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